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Her Secret Lies In The Woods

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Ok!!! So this deviation has a very long story behind it and it's making!!! Basically I've been struggling to make a "good enough" deviation for the contest from :icondark-fairy-tales: and here it is!! Now, this is the "darker" side that we didn't hear about in the stories about Cinderella. This is her hiding out in the woods finally done brewing a poisonous magical potion which she wants to slip into her evil mother and step-sister's porridge. :mwahaha: Wish me luck in the contest guys!!! :hug: :aww: :thanks: :love: :heart: :blowkiss: :please: :pray:


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Girl: *mizzd-stock
Background: *anaRasha-stock
Magical Brushes: `spiritsighs
Black Birds (also the distant ones): =flordelys
White Bird: *Tasastock

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Stars: creepydolly.com
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Idea-Picture is great,and so is idea.Honestly,after so many years of abuse,there are only two options:develop inferiority complex or become incredibly cruel.Call me cruel,but I prefer second option.5/5.

Concept-Victim turned avenger,old but still great.It is refreshing to see this character to do so.5/5.
And now,critique of details.


Face-Good,cold look in her eyes gives us clue what she thinks about her step-family and what she is going to do,without regret.However,it's little too much,almost as if she was villain.makeup should go off,she is servant after all. 3/5.

Clothes-Simple and beautiful,but little too new.hard to notice she was servant.2/5.

Birds-Realistical,and nice nod to Grimm's fairy tale.Ones in background are bit blurry.4.7/5.

Bottle-Great,crystal and clear,light seems to take form of flower,butterfly or pixie,I'm not sure,but still great.5/5.

Light-Shining and special effects are incredible.5/5.

Forest-Great and creepy,contrast of dead wood and blooming plants works so well,but transition should be little slower.4.5/5.

Wood-Bare and eerie,like corpse,which her family will soon be.5/5.

Mist-Omnious,it hides her secret well,and adds to mystery of magic.5/5.

Colours-Mostly cold,with warm yet weak in background,showing how abuse took it's toll on her.5/5.


Overall-4.65.Deserved for hard work.